Journal- 12/9

Today there was no special thing happened. I stayed home most of time because there were so many things to do. There were school homework, tutor homework, and academy homework. It took a long time. Studying time dwindle because of basketball. I go to basketball practice everyday except Monday and weekends. Also there are two basketball games in a week. Also I didn’t pass my mainstream test. My parents are worried about I’m in sheltered class. Therefore, I study in weekends. I studied today and finished my homework. Then I went to a beauty shop and I cut my hair. I cut my hair short. My hair was always same so I wanted to change. After I cut my hair, I regretted. My mother and father liked my hair but I didn’t like. I miss my before hair.

Persuasive essay

These days, most of students are short of exercise. Figure for this problem is to play sports in school. In school students can enjoy sports after school. That will be helpful.

Judging from my experience, school sports are really important. I was playing basketball. I enjoyed it! Also on weekends, I played games with other school. It's really fun and also I can exercise. It is not boring because I'm playing with my friends. I think school sports are good for students.

Even so, playing sports are not always good. Students can't study very much because of school sports. They have to practice after school and sometimes they have to play games on weekends. Then studying time will dwindle away. Also if they play sports, they're physical strength will dwindle.

All students can't play school sports. There are stipulation to play school sports. They have to get good grades to play team sports. If they play team sports, their studying time will decrease than before. Sometimes, they can't take lessons because of school sports game. Students have to study hard if they want to enjoy school sports.

In conclusion, in some ways school sports are good and in some ways school sports can be bad.
My opinion is doing school sports are good because if students study hard there is no problem at playing school sports.

Christmas(final draft)

In winter, there is holiday called Christmas. It is an annual holiday that celebrates the birth of Jesus. It is on December 25th.
In Christmas, Santa claus give presents to children because to celebrate winter holiday traditions. Also I wished to Santa claus and after morning there were presents beneath christmas tree.
Also in Christmas, we do many things. We sing carols. It's really fun. Last year, I sang carols with my friends in school. And we decorate christmas tree. I enjoy to decorate. Christmas tree tradition is believed to have begun in Germany in the 18th century. There are many plants for holiday. There are holly, mistletoe, red amaryllis, and Christmas cactus. Along with a Christmas tree, the interior of a home may be decorated with these plants, along with garlands and evergreen foliage. There are decorations. Other traditional decorations include bells, candles, candy canes, stockings, wreaths, and angels.
Christmas is the holiday that I like best.

10/31-Wednesday

Today was a normal day. I went to school. I was really sleepy so I couldn't concentrate. I almost fell asleep during classtime. First class was writing. Second class was health. Third class was oral communication. Then I had lunch. After, I played in soccer field. It was fun. Fifth class was Korean and last, I had chapel. I was really sleepy...................
Today was sleepy day. I couldn't do nothing. Even I can't to do my homework.

I learned about health.

3 most important relationships....

* The 3 most important Relationships that a student has…

The three most important Relationships that I have are friends, family, and teachers.

Friends are important because I can rely on them. I can talk everything that I can’t talk to my family. They appreciate what I feel and what I want to say. Sometimes they console me when I have problems. We spent good and bad time together.

Families are my closest people. Also friends are comfortable but families are more comfortable, because we knew each other from the moment I was born. They are a part of my life. They are important because they help me to be a good person and form my identity.

The relationship between my teachers and I are important because they educate many things to me and give information. For example, math teacher teaches me how to count numbers so that I can use money to buy things. Science teacher teaches me about importance of nature. English teacher helped me get out of illiteracy. I learn many things from teachers.

I think these three are most important relationships to me. Without friends, families, and teachers, I will be sad and I will be a fool.

10/28- Sunday

It was not a special day. I stayed home for a whole time. I did my school homework, academy homework, and tutor homework. It took a long time. Also I did computer games. It was really fun. In afternoon, my cousin came and played with me. Sometimes she bothered my so I was angry. She hit my teddy bear and she messed up my room. I was angry because I cleaned my room yesterday. She stayed for a long time.

It was a usual day. Nothing special

I think there is nothing that I learned

Ciara

Ciara

She is a popular singer. She is a great singer. Also she did her concert in Korea. I like her song very much. She also does a songwriter, record producer, dancer, and actress. She is really famous singer in the world.

She is a great dancer before a singer. Because she loves dance so she like to perform. Her dance is coming naturally from her and it looks like she is into it.
Ciara was inspired by Michael and Janet Jackson. Ciara respect the two prominent artists.

Ciara is passionate about her life. She had to sacrifice a lot of things to become a famous star. This job that Ciara has is not what people think, because she thinks it is a crazy job. But she also said, if you want to pursue a career, you have to control it.
I think she’s interesting because she is honest and says things that she wants clearly.

Last year her new album came out. The album name is “The Evolution.”The album is composed of Miami bass, Atlanta crunk, ballads, dance tracks, and old school songs with “big fat pop hooks.”Ciara is really popular. Most of people like her song. Also my brother loves Ciara’s song. Her new album songs are good. In this album, especially I like two songs. “Like a boy” and “Can’t leave Em’ Alone.”

In conclusion, I think Ciara is a perfect singer. She is passionate. I hope she will be the best singer in the world. She is great but if she try more and more, she will be more popular than other great singers.

draft

Writing
First draft

I think South and North Korea is getting much better. Now, South Korean can visit North Korea. Many people can meet their family or friend who didn’t met for a long time.
First, Noh moo hyun and Kim Jung il did economy project. It is to start preparation for the mount. Beakdu tours. Also they are plan to hold discussions with North Korean officials regarding the tourism project.
Second, we can visit mountain Geumgang. We couldn’t visit it before but now everyone in South Korea can but we rode boat or ship and go to North Korea. I think to ride plane and go to North Korea will be dangerous.
Third, we can meet people that we couldn’t see for a long time. Some people separate because of war. They will meet together.
I think South Korea and North Korea is getting better. They are getting closer. It is good news!

10/14- Sunday

It was really boring day. I studied almost for a whole day because my father. He said to me to finish all the homework. School homework, academy homework, and tutor homework. I didn't watched TV also I didn't played computer games because of homework. When I finished school homework, I was too tired so I took a nap. From 1 o'clock I started to do my academy homework. During I was doing my homework in 4:00pm, my tutor came so I learned Algebra. After tutor finished, I had dinner. Then I continued doing academy homework. Still there is so many things to do.

It was boring day. I was too tired of doing my homework.

I learned about equations from tutor.

10/13-Saturday

Today I woke up late. I woke up at 10:30am. I brushed my teeth and took a shower. After I had breakfast in 11:30am. Then I did my homework. At 1:00pm, I met helena and went to guitar academy because I wanted to learn bass. . After we finished talking with teacher, we ate icecream and walked around Rodeo. In 3 o'clock, helena went to academy to learn piano and I went back home. When I came back home, I took a rest and did my homework.

I was excited about to learn bass from next saturday.

I didn't learn anything today.

10/12-Friday

Today was the last of weekend. I was too happy because I can sleep for a long time in weekend.
I sleep only 5hours when I go to school. When I came back home, I slept for 3hours and had dinner. I thought it was morning so I thought it was breakfast. I did my academy homework.

Today I didn't felt well. I don't know why I feel bad.


I learned about China in Social Studies class.

10/11-Thursday

It was a usual day. I went to school and nothing special thing happened. When I came back from school, I went to math academy and learned math. I came back from math academy at 9:10pm. I started to do my homework. There are lots of homework.

It was bad and boring day. I felt bad because I got trouble because of studying.

I learned equations in math academy.

10/10-Wednesday

Today I went to school and had a last test. I took a test of reading and I wrote an essay. The reading test was really hard and the time was too short. When the test finished, I had to go to my class. I was too sleepy because of test.
When the school finished, I rode bus and went home. I played computer game with Helena. She was really good at game! I lose every game. I had tutor after I played computer game. My condition was not good because of cold so I didn’t study well so I got trouble.

I felt bad because I got trouble and I felt sick because of cold.

I learned about civilizations of china with my tutor.

10/9-Tuesday

Also today was really cold day so I got cold.
I had test in school. It was hard. I was too sleepy so I couldn't concentrate.
After school, I went to Dong de moon with Belinda. We stayed for a short time. When we going back to home, the traffic held up so it took a long time. I arrived my home at 7:00pm. I started to do my homework. I was too tired and I didn't felt good because of cold so I think I have to sleep early but there are alots of homework...........

I felt tired today.

I learned math in Algebra class.

10/8-Monday

It was a usual day. I woke up and prepared to go to school. When I went outside it was so cold!I didn't dry my hair so it was extremely cold. I slept in the bus because I didn't slept well at yesterday.
I went to school and I came back from the school. I went to Galleria with Helena to buy snack because tomorrow I have test.
When I went back home my tutor came and I studied. It finished at 9:30pm. Then I did my homework.

It was just normal day. It was boring as a usual day.

I learned grammar from my tutor.

10/7-Sunday

Today I was busy to do my school homework. In morning, I was playing computer games and in 2:00pm, my tutor came and studied math. After tutor left my home, I took a rest and continued doing homework. Still I didn't finished!!

I was too tired and boring. I wanted to sleep, I wanted to play but I couldn't. I hate school homeworks.

I learned math from my tutor. Also I learned about computer from my aunt. I wanted to have word processor license so I'm studying about computer.

10/6-Saturday

<-- This picture is what I bought today.

Early in morning, I went to dentist. When I came back home, I took a shower and watched TV. In 12 o'clock I met my Chungdam middle school friends and went to Gosok bus terminal for shopping. I bought two clothes. My friends and I was too tired so we decided to go home and take a rest and meet again and watch movie. I rode subway and went to home. I went to Helena's house to give something. When I went back home I was going to go out and meet friends, but I couldn't. My father said don't go so I couldn't go. I played computer game and started to do my homework.

It was a short time with my chungdam middle school friends but I enjoyed it. It was really fun!

I felt inconvenience because I didn't played so much.

I think there is nothing that I learned.

10/5-Friday

It was a usual day like other days. It was last day of school in this weekend!I'm happy because I can sleep alot! When I came back from school, I played computer games and slept. I had dinner after I woke up. Then I watched TV. In 10:00pm, I went to helena's house to borrow Algebra book. Outside was really cold. I did my homework when I came back from helena's house.

I was happy because I can sleep alot! I kept played games so I had headache.

I learned about China in Social studies class.

10/4-Thursday

Today I was really sleepy. Yesterday, I slept late because of homework so I slept only 5 hours. In school I was too sleepy so I couldn’t concentrate in class.
After school finished I rode bus. I saw movie and slept. I slept for a long time. When I arrive home, I had dinner. Then I went to math academy. I was too tired and I didn’t wanted going to academy. I wanted to sleep in home and take a rest. I was too sleepy so I asked for my teacher to finish early. Therefore, I finished 20minutes early. I came home in 9:00pm. I started to do my school homework. Everyday there is too much homework! I am disappointed. Because of homework so I can’t sleep enough! I think today I have to go to sleep late because of homework!!
It was really boring and tired and sleepy day. These days I’m getting angry easily because I got too much stress because of homework and also I’m tired.
I learned quadratic equation in math academy. It was kind of confusing.

10/3-Wednesday

It was a usual day. I went to school and come back from school! When I got off the bus I went to Galleria with helena. Then we eat cracker and I went to helena's house to drink water. I was too thirsty. Then I came back home. When I arrived home I went outside to eat dinner with my mother's friend's daughter. I ate sushi. It was delicious! After I finished dinner, I went back home. Then my tutor came so I studied for 3hours. There were so many homework so I was too busy. Science homework was so hard.

It was really busy day because of many homeworks.

I learned food's nutrition in Health class. Also I learned grammar from tutor.

10/2-Tuesday

Today morning, I woke up at 5:50. When I opened my eyes outside was dark. I thought it was midnight so I slept again. Then my mother came to my room and wake me up. It was almost 6:05. I had to go out at 6:25. I hurried. I took a shower and brushed teeth and ate breakfast and ran outside. I rode bus and went to school. I didn't finished homework so I did in bus. I was too busy to write journals that I didn't wrote before.
When I finished school, I rode bus and went home. I took a rest and did my school homework.

It was just a usual day. It was not fun.

I learned rational number, natural number, integer, whole number, and irrational number. Also I learned science. I learned salt water and I reviewed.

10/1-Monday

The Chuseok holiday finished so I went to school. I saw my friends. Most of my friends got haircut.
I had fun in school. When school finished I rode bus and went home. During I was in bus, my friends sang me a birthday song. Also my friend Wendy gave me a cake so we ate and played with it. We smeared cream each other so my face and hair became sticky. When I came back home I washed my face and hair. I took a rest and my tutor came. I learned grammar. After the extracurricular lesson finished, I started to do my school homework. There are too many homeworks so I'm exhausted. I think I have to sleep late.

I was exciting in school.

I learned grammar when my tutor came.

9/30-Sunday

It is the last day of chusok holiday. There were some homeworks that I had to do. I was too boring because I stayed home for a long time, so I went outside and came back. I finished my homework and prepared to go to school. I have to wake up early tomorrow so I have to go to sleep.

I was too boring and also I was excited about going to school.

My tutor came so I learned about math. I learned about natural numbers, rational numbers, irrational numbers, and integers.

9/29-Saturday

I woke up and had breakfast and brushed my teeth. I played computer game. When I finished doing computer game, I watched TV. I was dizzy because I watched TV for a long time. I took a rest. In 2:00pm, I went to my friend's house to ask about school homework. Then I went outside to buy something that I need. I came back home and cleaned my room. I had dinner and my mom's friend's daughter came and played with me. When she left my home I watched TV. Then I prepare to sleep.

It was boring day. There were nothing to do.

I didn't learned.

9/28-Friday

Today was my birthday!! In morning I met Rina, Belinda, and Helena in Galleria department store and we rode bus and went to Lotte World. Then we met wendy. We rode some rides. We couldn't rode many things because there were many people and also we were tired. We went to Gang nam spa and played. We came back home at 6:00pm. I came to my home with Wendy. We ate pizza. After we finished eating, we went outside and played for 50minutes. We went to a stationery store because I had to do an errand for my mother. Then we took a sticker picture and went to party shop and bought a cracker and tried it. After we tried it, Wendy rode bus and went to church to meet her mother. I went back home and saw pictures that I took.

I had really fun time with my friends. I enjoyed it.

I think there was nothing that I learned but one thing, I learned is that friends are importatn.

9/27-Thursday

Today was a usual day. I woke up and did my school homework. Then I went to math acameny at 1 o'clock. I came back home in 4 o'clock. I continued school homework. I had dinner and watched TV.

Today it was really boring. Time passed too slowly.

I didn't learned anying.

9/26-Wednesday

-->My haircut

Today I woke up late! I slept for 10 hours but I was still sleepy. I had breakfast. Then I took a shower and brushed my teeth. After I finished washing I started to do my school homework. I was too boring so I watched TV. I watched TV until 1:30pm and had lunch. Then I went to hair salon with Belinda. I cut my hair and ate ice cream in Baskin Robbins31. It was delicious. Belinda bought for me! When I arrived home it was almost 5 o'clock. I did my academy homework and at 6 o'clock, I had dinner. I kept studied after I finished dinner. I finally finished academy homework at 9:00pm. Then I watched TV and I will go to sleep now.

It was boring day. ㅠㅠ I want to go to school.

I learned that I have to spare money. Today I got trouble because I used too much money for one week !

9/25-Tuesday

It is Chusok! It is holiday but I didn't go anywhere. First time, my mother said I will go to grandparents' house but we didn't go. Also my aunt and grandmother was going to come to my house and sleep but they didn't came so I stayed home. I was too boring to stay home for a whole time. I did my homework and slept and ate many things. It was chusok but I didn't ate song peon because there was no song peon in my house. ㅠㅠ

Today it was really boring day. I just slept for a long time, ate too much foods, and I studied. It was the worst chusok holiday.

9/24-Monday

Today I went to bus terminal again for shopping with friends. When we finished shopping we had lunch and went to apgujung dong. I went to Noraebang. It was fun.
We went to Baskin Robbins after Noraebang. We ate icecream. I ate delicious icecream!
I came back home almost at 3 o'clock. One of my friend had to wait for her mom so we came to my home together but she stayed for only 20minutes. When my friend left my home, I slept because I was too tired. I had dinner after I woke up and played computer games.

I had fun with my friends. Yesterday my feeling was bad but after I played with my friends, I felt much better!

9/23-Sunday

Today I went to bus terminal with my friend. Also there are many clothing stores. I bought clothes and shoes. I stayed for an hour. I didn't had so much money and also I was too tired so I came home early. I went home and took a rest then I did my homework with my friend. My friend went her home almost at 6o'clock. Then I ate my dinner. After I finished dinner, I watched TV and played computer games.
I had fun today with my friend.

A sleepy day- 9/19

It was sleepy day. These days I often fell asleep during class but today was the most sleepy day. Classes were boring especially today.
First class was writing. I wrote journal and took a paragraph quiz. After the writing class finished, I went to auditorium for chapel. I got small snack because my birthday was coming.
When the chapel finished I went to advisory.
Third class was Korean. I read a book and solve questions about that story. It was really boring and hard to read books.
Finally it was lunch time. I went to cafetaria and had lunch. I couldn't play outside because it was raining so I stayed inside cafetaria with my friends.
The lunch time finished, I went to fourth class. It was health. This class was kind of fun.
When the school finished I rode bus and went to academy.
When I came back from academy, I worked on my homework.
I'm so sleepy !

Usual day-9/18

Today was a usual day. I went to school. I was late for homeroom so I was in trouble but this time teacher just forgave me.
First class was Korean. I read story and solve the problems. Second class was Social studies. I took a china map test. It was confusing. Third class was Health. I was too sleepy.
I had lunch after the health class finished. I played in cafetaria with friends after we finished lunch. It was raining so we couldn't go outside.
The bell rang. I went to Science class. I learned about biomes. It was boring and sleepy. I almost fell asleep. Last class was Algebra. I solve problems and prepared for test on thursday.
After school, I rode bus and went home. I took a rest and my tutor came at 7:00pm. I studied until 9:00pm. I was too sleepy. I'm stiil sleepy. I have too many homework so I am working now.

Sad day-9/17

<--My brother

Bye Bye~!

Today my brother went to the army. I was going to say goodbye in morning but I couldn't because my brother was sleeping. When I arrived to school my brother called me. Then he said to me sorry for not being good brother. I was impressed. To speak honestly, I was more mean to him. I struggled to hold his tears back. After I finished conversation with my brother, I cried. I cried for a long time. I tried to stop crying but I couldn't. I tried to stop crying and went to first class. The first class was Algebra. I learned about multiplicative and division of negative and positive. It was boring because I kept solve problems. Second class was Writing. I took a quiz of paragraph and learned how to writer journal. Third class was Science. It was really boring because I watched boring science movie and took a test. Finally it was lunchtime. I went to cafetaria with my friends and had lunch. We played in soccer field after we finished lunch.
When the bell rang we packed up and went to next class. Fourth class was Reading. We checked our homework and reviewed stories. Last class was Oral Communication. This class was also boring because we just had conversation.
The class finished and I rode bus and went to academy. I studied in academy. I was too tired.
Today was sad day. I miss my brother so much.

Gloomy day- 9/16

Today I stayed home for a whole day. There were too many things to do so I studied in home.
In morning, I did my school homework. There were alots of homework. Social Studies, Writing, Reading, Korean..... And in afternoon my tutor came. I learned math. It was really boring.
When tutoring, I continued my school homework. I finished school work it was almost 6:00pm. I had dinner. During I was eating dinner the bell rang. I opened the door then my father's friends came because of my brother. My brother will enlist in the army tomorrow. I will miss him very much. Today will be the last day with my brother. I can see him next year.
Today was boring and sad day.

A busy day- 9/15

Today was really busy day. I woke up and prepare and went to my grandparent's house. I stayed for 3hours in my grandparent's house. When I came back home I took a nap.
In 6;00pm, I went to photo studio and took a family picture. Then I had dinner with my family.
It was almost 8o'clock when I came back home. I wrote journal and played.
Today was busy day because soon my brother will enlist in the army.

Rainy day- 9/14

It was usual day. I went to school.
The first class was Health. I made powerpoint of Herarchy. It was boring. Second class was Korean. I read some books and learned about it. I had reading so I didn't liked so much. Third class was Reading. I read a story and learned about it. When the reading class finished, I went to cafetaria to have lunch. I played with my friends after I finished eating lunch. We watched soccer. During we were watching, the bell rang so we went to next class. Fourth class was Writing. I made blog. I have to write journal in my blog everyday!
Last class was Social studies. I learned about China. I was too sleepy because history is boring.
When the classes finished I rode school bus and went to academy. I studied until 8 o'clock and went home. I arrived home at 9:30pm because it was raining so the traffic was blocked. I hate rainy day because there are traffic problems and also I get wet.
Today I felt bad because it was keep on raining.