Sunday, October 21, 2007

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Writing
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I think South and North Korea is getting much better. Now, South Korean can visit North Korea. Many people can meet their family or friend who didn’t met for a long time.
First, Noh moo hyun and Kim Jung il did economy project. It is to start preparation for the mount. Beakdu tours. Also they are plan to hold discussions with North Korean officials regarding the tourism project.
Second, we can visit mountain Geumgang. We couldn’t visit it before but now everyone in South Korea can but we rode boat or ship and go to North Korea. I think to ride plane and go to North Korea will be dangerous.
Third, we can meet people that we couldn’t see for a long time. Some people separate because of war. They will meet together.
I think South Korea and North Korea is getting better. They are getting closer. It is good news!

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